The Curse from sophiereid95
The ending of the opening sequence needs to be planned in more detail, two possible ideas have been discussed. The first being an external setting in a field, with a fast pan circling the female protagonist with a fast cut back to the house location this shows the audience her mental state. The second option being the female protagonist after running down the stairs, grabs a knife from the kitchen and runs behind a sofa. The audience have no idea why she has reacted this was creating an enigma. She says 'Toby is that you?' But who is Toby? suddenly there is a fade out and she is standing infront of the mirror, not with a knife but a toothbrush, is she sane?
Constructive critism on the baby videos, there could be problems with putting the videos on to Final Cut due to their age. We would need to look in to this problem and our solution if this fails to work will be, Layering shots of the protagonist sleeping, making it clear she is in discomfort and having a nightmare. We would source sounds of babys laughing although taunting her in her thoughts.
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